The Blood War *Story*

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Yeah but I gotta proofread it and correct mistakes and take out cheesy parts. But I did write it and it's done just gotta get my friend to read it through, since
"My eye sees my creation a good one but to an other eye it's a mess" -Redbee3
 
Yeah but I gotta proofread it and correct mistakes and take out cheesy parts. But I did write it and it's done just gotta get my friend to read it through, since
"My eye sees my creation a good one but to an other eye it's a mess" -Redbee3
dat quote
 
Chapter 2: Korean Sam Base
A few chants arose in the Base, I began to lay low away from their sight. Just in case I pulled out my assault rifle,and scanned around with my sights. I continuously hoped for the team to arrive without them noticing us, as for they can be enemies. I slowly made my way over, boulder to boulder and Tree to Tree. Getting a closer view of the camp was better yet riskier. I aimed down my sights again and scanned around their fence line I read the sign that held Korean Letters spelling out, "Korean Sam Base". I quickly lean back to the boulder and set down the radio," Echo 6 to Echo Squad, uh I just found out that this is a Korean Camp so whatever you do, do not approach it with anything that'll alert them." I whispered. I then heard a faint rumbling noise again, it was the sound of the roaring Humvee's, "Get out a few back It's getting to loud!" I said speaking into the radio. Killa then responded back, "Alright Red, we're holding back and we're moving towards you on foot. Stay there." He called. I focused back to the camp and noticed a few guards staring into the fields. I then looked back at the team slowly making their way towards me, "I think they're picking up our signal. It might be faint to them so don't call back just signal me from a far." After a few minutes in the same position Killa and the rest of the team arrived." Damn. That's a well protected camp" Whispered Caz. "Red, I need you to take these Binoculars and move forward a few down to that tree trunk you signal me when to go forward. I nodded back and snatched the binoculars," It's risky but I'll do it" I ran down a few feet keeping my footsteps silent in the plushy green grass. I fell back onto a Boulder just a few hundred feet forward from the squad, I picked up the Binoculars scanning the camp." The camp hasn't noticed us yet, Better get closer." I murmured. I fell into mud as I took a step from the trunk, I swapped my Binoculars with my gun letting them fall into a small crevice. I shrugged and continued. A loud Chant again rose from the camp, this time it wasn't like the other ones. It was more of a warning, the Koreans then pulled out a group of people, a group of what appeared to be part of the U.S Army."Oh no...." I whispered. I looked back at the team, apparently they noticed too yet Killa refused to give up our position as for it could compromise our goal leaving the Korean in victory. I stood there watching as each one got blindfolded and slammed into the fence. The group of U.S Army men were each aligned against the fence, rubbed and bruised, they were facing forward as a Korean Soldier held a Gun to their faces. A shot was heard and blood spilled over as one of our soldiers fell to the floor, dead. Another against another, shot for a shot our soldiers were dying. We couldn't do anything of it. After about 10 dead one soldier tried to escape, yet was slammed back into the fence, on his knees he was executed by each member of the Camp. Watching our soldiers continue to die was a horrible thing. Killa urged to do something, so he called in the Charlie Squad. The Korean soldiers, a few of them, proceeded back into the main building. "No the signal, they're picking up our signal." I whispered. Another few shots were heard. "No! Please! No-" Yelled a soldier, after a few 20 were dead the Camp then continued with their training of some sort. Killa felt terrible and set his head down. Charlie wasn't coming. I then looked back at our terrified group as they nodded at me in sadness. I stood up and ran a few more feet down to a Boulder. As I approached the boulder another Chant arose. "No come on no...." I said. I peered over and saw another group of soldiers come out, then blind folded. I felt a near urge of crying as each one was then aligned against the fence. "NO!" I yelled. I had a break point and the korean soldiers looked out into the field and searched their forests. A Korean Soldier then Pulled out a Megaphone and called out for us. "Red, What the Hell!" Yelled killa through the radio. I stood there in shock as the Korean Soldier counted down from 10 to 1. "No, damn!" I yelled. Then I heard a loud roar of Rifles and all types of weapons go off and the U.S soldiers cry out. I looked back at the team in horror as they looked back at me dumbfounded yet with an expression of anger towards me. Then, a loud burst of assault rifles began to hit my boulder as I get shot in the arm and fall back down...
 
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Take my condom.Hide the kids..Were going into war..
 
good job getting shot in the arm and stuff
 
Oh yeah thanks, apparently I'm getting shot in the arm and falling into mud while the rest of yall are hiding behind a small hill and the U.S Army Soldiers get killed against a fence. My story is twisted ='[
 
Oh yeah thanks, apparently I'm getting shot in the arm and falling into mud while the rest of yall are hiding behind a small hill and the U.S Army Soldiers get killed against a fence. My story is twisted ='[
If you make it more.. I guess 'family-friendly' would be the word, the story would suck, I'm jussayin. I just have one suggestion though- PARAGRAPHS, USE THEM. it's kinda hard to read the chapter when it's all one big block of text :P
 
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Chapter 3: Black Hawks
The pain and agony gripped my body as I fell back down into another streaming pile of mud, I can hear the group's shouting echoing through my mind. The gunshot was a small one yet it pierced me so hard It felt as if a hundred more got me, I was in serious pain. I couldn't stand up as I was shocked thinking nothing more than the team and the Commander blaming me for what i did do. RATATATATATATATATATAT Endless sounds of gunshots can be heard throughout the forest, "Red! Get up! Red!" I couldn't figure out who was calling my name but I snapped out of shock and sat up. I reached for my gun when a bullet shot by nearly hitting my arm again. "Damn." I picked up the gun and sat behind the boulder,I can see the group waving at me signaling to come back. I knew if I'd stay there it was too dangerous yet if I ran back a few Hundred feet to the group I would be taking a huge risk of getting shot. Unfortunately our Medic, Isometrikgiraffe or as well call him Isome, was back with the group leaving me stranded here. RATATATATATATATAT I lifted the gun and aimed back at the Sam Base, I panned around until I settled for a squad of Korean soldiers taking cover behind a truck."Here we go,arrh,come on." I said to myself. As I began to fire I couldn't keep the gun steady enough to actually shoot any of them but with my luck I shot the Gas Tank near it setting their position on fire. "Red! Take Cover!" I took a quick glance back at the group as Killa yelled at me,"Grenade!" I hurdled back down behind the boulder expecting a loud explosion but all I heard was a faint one right behind the gun sounds and the shattering noise of bullets piercing every part of our positions.
My mind was thrown off course after listening to nothing but gun noises, looking down in complete fear staring at nothing else but a rock. "Get your head in the game!" I then snapped again and sat back up when I heard Rumbling noises. The Black hawks were coming. The Helicopters began to descend behind the hill while the other two flew over me firing missiles at their base. "Where's My Ride?" I picked up the radio and signaled for help, "Aye! You forgot me guys!?" I yelled. The Second hawk, Black 2-2, Began to fly back into the forest. "This is Black 2-2, I picked up your signal can you give me your coordinates to descend in your location. Over."
"Yeah it's me Red, Echo Six? I- I'm down at the boulder left side rim of the forest!"
"Okay can you confirm-"
"I'm-at-the-boulder! Please, I'm hurt and I'm losing blood"
The hawk began to fly in a circle searching as I signaled it, It throttled back a little and landed a few feet ahead and A man stepped out."We're calling in Delta,get in the Hawk! We'll take it from here!"The Charlie squad all stepped out and ran over to their positions to take on the Koreans. "How far's delta?" I asked. The Pilot turned his head at me and back at his front view," About a Minute or so? Not far. Get in damnit!" He yelled. I reached over to a bar and climbed onto the Hawk. "Red? Can you hear me? It's Aareo!" I picked up the radio," Yeah?" "Killa wants you to tell Pilot to take you back to our Camp!" A nudged the pilot and told him what Aareo just said, he refused to and swung the Hawk back,"We can't! I got orders to hit here!" He yelled. I was seriously pisses that I nudged the Co-Pilot to talk to him, as I look out I saw delta come by with Humvees across the Valley and The Koreans from the opposite side with tanks. "Oh No..." All of a sudden I felt a sudden thud and a loud metal whacking noise, the blades were torn and the hawk's wing was on fire. I got flung back hitting the medic as the Hawk slid over to it's right losing control. BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP
The Hawk was going down, and the blade whacking it's rear. We hit the ground with a large thud, we were dug into the ground half the hawk sticking out and the Koreans approaching us fast, our Hawk was on fire and we saw the Delta Team's Humvee roll over next to us. Both of us were down, smacked into each other. The steel of each of our vehicles bent into each other, I can hear the group inside burning as our fire passes onto their's. One smacking the window as his burns up and cries for help. My vision began to blur as the Korean soldiers can be heard from the outside of our dug in hawk....
 
Chapter 4 Burned Down
"Get down! They got us all over! Aaaarrrghhhhh!"
"Sargent!? Oh man! Help! We need help over here!"
I felt bruised all over and my stomach began to churn. The blood ran down my forehead and my leg was pinned under the twisted metal sheet of the Hawk. I heard a couple of our men yell for help as I believe one of The Sargent got shot, I couldn't feel anything down at my leg. I couldn't crawl out, I had to drag the piece of metal off before I've done anything. I began to pick at the shredded metal with a fairly weighed blade, I made little progress. Just across from my position I could here Delta's Truck on fire as their squad begins to yell and burn."Aw crap, help!" I yelled. The radio then blurred out of a sudden with a faint signal, it sounded like Caz or someone I just couldn't tell. I tried to reach for the radio but I couldn't get anywhere far with this thing pinning me down...
I pushed harder yet still didn't advance in anything, I heard a guy yell coming from the flipped over Humvee. "Gotta get myself- out!" I yelled. I then pushed again harder and the piece of metal nudged a bit. The metal fell to the right and I dragged myself out as the fire behind it grew. The heat was unbearable but I couldn't do anything but find my way out of this twisted piece of crap. I saw. Hole just big enough for me to slide my body out with a cut or two, it was my only way out. Before i did that, I searched for a gun and survivors in the Hawk. The crew, about seven of them, we're dead I picked up an assault rifle and hung it over my shoulder. I put my legs out front and slid legs first through the hole, I was still badly hurt because of my pinned leg. Once I got out I slid the gun out and made it into the flaming truck, "Hello?" I called. "Over here! Please, I'm stuck!" I found a man laying down under a seat and the cushions were on fire, he seemed badly burned and his legs were pinned. "You too." I sighed. I proceeded to help him push the seat off of him. "This really got me." He said. He handed me a pipe and pointed at the end of the seat, I jammed the pipe and and began to lift. The fire grew bigger and singed my hair, I fell back still holding the pipe in place and I gave it one last lift. The man then dragged himself out as I let the seat fall back. "Here grab my hand." I said. He reached over and I pulled him out avoiding the fire. We then dragged each other out of the Humvee. He limped over behind a boulder as I followed him.
He sat down and massaged his leg, "You ok?" I asked. He nodded and continued on. "What's your name?" He looked at me and back at the Humvee, "My squad calls me Mega." The truck then blew up in a bursting flaming ball and landed a few feet near us. "You know sorry about your squad." I said. Mega stopped massaging his leg and began to crouch, "they're still firing at us, Look." I saw The Korean's trucks, all in large rows just drove by us as we snuck under the grass. "You're a tough one Mega."
KKKKRRRSSSHHH " Red-ok? Are- now?" The radio blurred once more, the signal wasn't great either. "Trucks are heading to the camp, we gotta warn them somehow." Mega said. "Aw crap, your probably right. Lets hope not"
"That radio work? Red?"
"I'm pretty sure it doesn't just picks up calls."
"That's our only way of contact with them."
Mega then stood up and limped over to a dead Korean soldier, he took the dead soldier's gun and held it with an air of confidence. He then pointed at one of the empty trucks, filled with dead Korean soldiers. Both of us limped over to the truck, Mega slowly dropped the bodies out as I kept watch. "Hurry." I said. "Get in, wipe the blood off." I limped around and climbed into the passenger seat as mega drove. The truck's engine roared as we drove down the valley, my leg started to bruise badly and the cut was squirting out blood. I positioned my gun aiming out the window as we drove by Korean trucks, "Turn! We gotta take out a few before they get to our camp! See any of our troops?" I called. Mega took a strong turn and the car began to skid through the mud as I fired out the window. We got closer to the camp and the more smoke we smelled. "Damn, this smell is getting heavy."
We can see smoke peering from over the hill and I can see the radio tower knocked over and on it's side.
"The camp!"
 
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Chapter 5 Tents on fire
We drove by the radio tower and we can see the camp overhead. The camp's military equipment gone and ruined, hundreds of the U.S Marines lay dead across the mud, the tents were in fire, our Radio station blown on its side and the the town of Yingkou Was under attack. "Where's echo?" I asked. Mega pulled over the medical supply tent and limped inside. I stayed in the truck aiming my gun out waiting for mega,"Need anything?" He called. I walked out and went inside,"Bandages." I said. He tossed me a roll and got one of his own. We both sat down and covered our injuries with bandages. "Who started this anyway? Gave away our position,technically killed hundreds of men." I then felt a sudden feel of guilt, right after he said that I felt as if it was my fault when it truly was. I honestly didn't mean to I just didn't want to see another group get executed while hundreds of us stand back without knowing. I think mega saw the guilt in me we he saw me look away, "You, you did this?" He asked.
I looked away from him and stared outside into a blazing fire,"Holy crap. YOU did this!?" He yelled is a desperate need of response. I slowly turned my head to mega and nodded, "I-I didn't really-I couldn't-sorry." I studded end in a loss of words waiting for mega to flip out and threaten me he just sighed and walked out of the tent. "The rest of the tents are on fire and not one voice of an American solider I hear." He said, he sounded pretty angry as he kept sighing heavily as he tried to make me feel a stronger guilt, blame. He picked up a pistol from the ground and chuckled, he stared at the gun smiling. "You know it's a shame I have to do this Red. I thought you were a pretty good guy..." He said. In a quick second he turned around and held the gun in my face, "look we just met and all, but I didn't do anything." I tried to convince him, I was afraid he would shoot in an instance and this would all be over for me.
He had his finger on the trigger and right when he chuckled even more I swung my hand and hit the pistol away from him, it landed on the mud just a few feet away. He then threw a punch at me knocking me down and he began to kick me, he reached for the pistol when a gunshot was heard. We both turned and it was Killa, "holy crap! You made it!" I yelled in surprise. "Knock it off! Red, come with me. Who's this?" Killa asked. I looked back at mega and back at him, "his name is Mega. I helped get out of a burning truck" I responded. He looked dumbfounded and walked away signaling me to come with him, I stood up wiping the blood off my face and followed Killa. He took me to bunker made of pure stone with a hawk slammed into the side of the bunker. "Rest of them are in there, I heard your voice so I went over to check it out. Therefore you're here." He said.
"Look I'm sorry, I didn't me to do all this."
"It's not good at you did this, still pissed off, but glad you made it."
We then heard footsteps behind us and it was two Korean soldiers aiming their guns at us, they began to converse and laugh. Again in a quick second two shots were fired, as the soldiers fell mega was behind them holding his pistol. "Thought you needed my help?" He said. Killa invited inside.
 
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I can't tell if you made me a badass or a jerk
 
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Well it doesn't matter I think you'll turn out to be both or something xD
 
The story is coming back up around January 2013, I have 8 Chapters done but my friend will be revising it all, you know to make sure and make it seem "cool"

Hope to see you guys reading the Blood War soon!
~Redbee3
 
The 8 Chapters will be posted Next Friday, I'm sorry I've waited long, got busy with stuff...
lol
But It's coming back for whoever is reading, I don't care, but it's coming back
Remember Friday Next week :3
 

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