Hello, on a small forum for a minecraft server I wrote a story and the site actually really liked it. I was wondering if you guys wanted to see it, and perhaps I can re-write the whole story for here 
Here's a preview. My story is about zambies and these two guys and they fight for sparta(not exactly sparta but.. yeah.)
It was 1:15 in the afternoon, and my friend and I were huddled up in a small house we found. We had to break down a window to get in and patch it up, but, it was worth it. There was a clock which'd tell us the time, hence how I knew it was 1:15, kitchen, two rooms, a living room, and an attic. We haven't been to the attic yet. My friend, who's name is Billy, and I have only found this house a couple nights ago. Billy had just finished having something to eat and he went to take a nap in his room about 15 minutes ago. The smell of chicken filled the air. Billy had a little of one of those TV dinners, there was one in the freezer. I had checked the shelves, there wasn't a lot of food left... we'd have to go into town and get some more food. Town wasn't a long way from our house. We could walk there and get to it within about 15 to 20 minutes. It was a quite small town actually, but it had a few things to show it off. It had a big clock tower that you'd be able to see from basically anywhere, but it had stopped working. Weird how a big clock tower isn't working but a little clock in a small house does, isn't it? But it was dangerous to go in town, obviously. The infection had spread more than anyone ever thought, I could look out the window right now and see at least 20 of them. Them... I am talking about the victims.. the victims of the infection. They are hungry.. but not for food. They hunt the humans, and they.. I can't even explain how bad it is, what they have been doing.. I tried not to think about it.
I suddenly heard Billy's door open, which caught me off guard. Billy walked out, yawning. "Yeah.. I couldn't really sleep. What's up?" He said in a tired voice, meaning I guess he was just lying down. "Well, I looked in the shelves and stuff.. We're just about out of food, Billy. We have to go into town." I replied. I didn't try and sugarcoat it, I gave it to him as it is. Billy had a look of concern on his face as he heard what I had said.. He never wants to there, he has a fear of getting killed by the infected. Which I see why.. we almost get killed each time. When we head back we usually have a horde chasing us. It's really.. scary. "...I guess we should go soon then.. before it gets dark.." Billy said to me. Night is a really bad time to do this kinda stuff. You can't really see the infected and it's hard to see in general. So it is a great idea to do it before 8:00pm, around then is when it gets dark. "Yeah. Let's get ready." I eventually replied. I bit my lip as I walked towards my room. I had a little bag in the corner, it had my weapons. I put my hand in there and pulled out a big kitchen knife which I found, well, in the kitchen. I kept that for close range engagements. I had a gun, but I didn't want to bring it, because it is a loud weapon and the infected are attracted to noise. Don't want to risk unwanted attention. I closed up the bag and went to the living room. The living room was right next to the kitchen, and also right outside our rooms. Billy walked out of his room with a fire axe. He found that while we were going through a forest looking for shelter, it was in a tree. I let him have it, as I already had a low caliber pistol. Which, I still have. "Let's go, dude." Billy said to me as he readied his axe. "Alright. Let's get this over and done with." I replied.
A little long for a preview but hey, that's good right? Haha. Anyways, that's my writing, and a little chapter from my story! It isn't a word for word copy, but that what the chapter basically was. Actually, it's more detailed.
So please tell me what you think, and I will post the entire story here! It's ten chapters long, and each chapter was kinda long, and I think you will enjoy it. Cya!
Here's a preview. My story is about zambies and these two guys and they fight for sparta(not exactly sparta but.. yeah.)It was 1:15 in the afternoon, and my friend and I were huddled up in a small house we found. We had to break down a window to get in and patch it up, but, it was worth it. There was a clock which'd tell us the time, hence how I knew it was 1:15, kitchen, two rooms, a living room, and an attic. We haven't been to the attic yet. My friend, who's name is Billy, and I have only found this house a couple nights ago. Billy had just finished having something to eat and he went to take a nap in his room about 15 minutes ago. The smell of chicken filled the air. Billy had a little of one of those TV dinners, there was one in the freezer. I had checked the shelves, there wasn't a lot of food left... we'd have to go into town and get some more food. Town wasn't a long way from our house. We could walk there and get to it within about 15 to 20 minutes. It was a quite small town actually, but it had a few things to show it off. It had a big clock tower that you'd be able to see from basically anywhere, but it had stopped working. Weird how a big clock tower isn't working but a little clock in a small house does, isn't it? But it was dangerous to go in town, obviously. The infection had spread more than anyone ever thought, I could look out the window right now and see at least 20 of them. Them... I am talking about the victims.. the victims of the infection. They are hungry.. but not for food. They hunt the humans, and they.. I can't even explain how bad it is, what they have been doing.. I tried not to think about it.
I suddenly heard Billy's door open, which caught me off guard. Billy walked out, yawning. "Yeah.. I couldn't really sleep. What's up?" He said in a tired voice, meaning I guess he was just lying down. "Well, I looked in the shelves and stuff.. We're just about out of food, Billy. We have to go into town." I replied. I didn't try and sugarcoat it, I gave it to him as it is. Billy had a look of concern on his face as he heard what I had said.. He never wants to there, he has a fear of getting killed by the infected. Which I see why.. we almost get killed each time. When we head back we usually have a horde chasing us. It's really.. scary. "...I guess we should go soon then.. before it gets dark.." Billy said to me. Night is a really bad time to do this kinda stuff. You can't really see the infected and it's hard to see in general. So it is a great idea to do it before 8:00pm, around then is when it gets dark. "Yeah. Let's get ready." I eventually replied. I bit my lip as I walked towards my room. I had a little bag in the corner, it had my weapons. I put my hand in there and pulled out a big kitchen knife which I found, well, in the kitchen. I kept that for close range engagements. I had a gun, but I didn't want to bring it, because it is a loud weapon and the infected are attracted to noise. Don't want to risk unwanted attention. I closed up the bag and went to the living room. The living room was right next to the kitchen, and also right outside our rooms. Billy walked out of his room with a fire axe. He found that while we were going through a forest looking for shelter, it was in a tree. I let him have it, as I already had a low caliber pistol. Which, I still have. "Let's go, dude." Billy said to me as he readied his axe. "Alright. Let's get this over and done with." I replied.
A little long for a preview but hey, that's good right? Haha. Anyways, that's my writing, and a little chapter from my story! It isn't a word for word copy, but that what the chapter basically was. Actually, it's more detailed.
So please tell me what you think, and I will post the entire story here! It's ten chapters long, and each chapter was kinda long, and I think you will enjoy it. Cya!
. It give's the 'boring' forums something special 
u hav my Support :3